Hey, I'm sorry, but we can't roll this, as the background isn't Paschmahaa, and Garochs haven't left Paschmahaa at this time.
Paschmahaa does have grass on its islands, but it's beach grass. I usually just seach 'beach grass' for reference, but here's a good image for you. It also has red sand dotted with black if you wind up showing that.
There should be more water showing, and the water should be black due to the volcanic activity. Maybe remove the land formation in the middle of the water and replace it with more water?
Lastly, any mountains showing should be more distant and not snowcapped, as the closest mountains are the molten highlands! c:
Please repost when you've got edits done, however you want to do them!
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2023-12-12 10:04:15
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Hey, I'm sorry, but we can't roll this, as the background isn't Paschmahaa, and Garochs haven't left Paschmahaa at this time.
Paschmahaa does have grass on its islands, but it's beach grass. I usually just seach 'beach grass' for reference, but here's a good image for you. It also has red sand dotted with black if you wind up showing that.
There should be more water showing, and the water should be black due to the volcanic activity. Maybe remove the land formation in the middle of the water and replace it with more water?
Lastly, any mountains showing should be more distant and not snowcapped, as the closest mountains are the molten highlands! c:
Please repost when you've got edits done, however you want to do them!
2023-12-13 00:18:52
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