Link your Piece: Danger Link the portrayed ketucari: Milega Did you complete a bonus prompt, if yes, which? B: Show your ketucari interacting with one of the new fauna (Luta)
Per Ketucari, for your first Entry: Honorable Interaction
(just read the reply to the first one. I dunno if this'll count or not? If not, that's okay, I just wanted to break up what I'd written already and I can do something else)
Hey while this piece is fun and clever and we'd like to see this plotline continued in adventures and other activities, there's a few things we need you to fix for us to roll this as part of the event! First we need Milega to be involved with the cartography guild, not simply seeking out the info on her own, while she can certainly have goals of being alone she needs to be part of helping the guild which is integral to this event and its canon.
Secondly, there needs to be more interaction with the stranger garoch, we currently can't tell which Garoch you picked and the prompt needs to be focused on the stranger. If we're understanding right, it looks like you've used the Starter, Vara? Unfortunately Vara's not one of the "Strangers". They're the ones linked up in the raffle.
Third, toa is the term used for male ketucari and kadin for female! (Please disregard this if that was intentional.)
Fourth and please disregard if this is a character choice, Kaur is actually a starter and not a god, just in case you meant to pick one of the gods at the start there!
Sorry for the trouble! Please feel free to submit this version as an adventure when you have the chance! (Make sure Milega has either Aquatic or that you use a Rebreather item!)
SunriseHill
Link your Piece: Danger
Link the portrayed ketucari: Milega
Did you complete a bonus prompt, if yes, which? B: Show your ketucari interacting with one of the new fauna (Luta)
Per Ketucari, for your first Entry: Honorable Interaction
(just read the reply to the first one. I dunno if this'll count or not? If not, that's okay, I just wanted to break up what I'd written already and I can do something else)
2024-01-16 07:26:51 (Edited 2024-01-16 07:28:39)
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IIIXKitsuneXIII Staff Member
Hey while this piece is fun and clever and we'd like to see this plotline continued in adventures and other activities, there's a few things we need you to fix for us to roll this as part of the event! First we need Milega to be involved with the cartography guild, not simply seeking out the info on her own, while she can certainly have goals of being alone she needs to be part of helping the guild which is integral to this event and its canon.
Secondly, there needs to be more interaction with the stranger garoch, we currently can't tell which Garoch you picked and the prompt needs to be focused on the stranger. If we're understanding right, it looks like you've used the Starter, Vara? Unfortunately Vara's not one of the "Strangers". They're the ones linked up in the raffle.
Third, toa is the term used for male ketucari and kadin for female! (Please disregard this if that was intentional.)
Fourth and please disregard if this is a character choice, Kaur is actually a starter and not a god, just in case you meant to pick one of the gods at the start there!
Sorry for the trouble! Please feel free to submit this version as an adventure when you have the chance! (Make sure Milega has either Aquatic or that you use a Rebreather item!)
Sorry for the trouble!
2024-01-17 04:53:25
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